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(Set in the Young Justice universe) (At Mount Justice, Miss Martian is entering the Cave through the Zeta-Tube) Computer: Recognized: Miss Martian B05. (Miss Martian walks out of the Zeta-Tube and heads over to the training circle) Miss Martian: I'm back from Chicago, I'm ready for some training Black Canary....... (Miss Martian gasps when she saw her teammates and Black Canary laying on the floor, unconscious. Also, Red Tornado laying on the floor with some kind of EMP device on his chest) Miss Martian: Guys! Canary! (Miss Martian kneels down and checks Black Canary pulse) Miss Martian: She's alive, they're all alive, just knocked un

The test of any good fiction is that you should care something for the characters; the good to succeed, the bad to fail. The trouble with most fiction is that you want them all to land in hell, together, as quickly as possible. ~Mark Twain ***** As always, Mark Twain hit the nail on the head. One of my biggest complaints with online fiction is the lackluster characterization I frequently see. Occasionally, I’ll stumble onto a story in which the characters move me on a profound level, and like Mr. Twain suggested, I start to care about them like I would a friend or family member. Unfortunately, 99% of the time, one chapter into most p